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Choppy animation, but you pull it off well. The content is funny overall, and definitely relevant considering all of the new superhero movies lately. I do think that you could go without that "le meme face" thing. Your animation stands on its own without relying on "le epic may mays".

The graphics aren't amazing, but there are enough little jokes and bits of absurdity to make up for it. Overall, very good Pokemon parody.

Pretty funny. It definitely raises the question of how exactly you are able to communicate with all of the NPC when they all speak animalese.

It was a bit short, but I liked the ending with the explosions.

Very good animation.

The story, animation, and sound were all very good. I don't really have any complaints.

I look forward to seeing more of your work.

SuperJeffoMan responds:

Thanks man :)

i'm not entirely sure what this is, but the tune is catchy.

Unfortunately, the animation only reuses the same few frames over and over again. There really isn't any substance to the animation. It relies too heavily on the music.

There isn't a lot of motion. All of the animation looks a bit jumpy. Not much tweening was done to smooth it out. There also isn't any real conclusion to the story.

It would also be appreciated if you include a preloader in your next flash. You can download an official Newgrounds preloader under Community > Downloads.

I'm a bit disappointed thst there isn't more to it. It's a good start.

I would like to see it evolve into some sort of full story rather than a short animation.

It is a bit simplistic, however. That does not mean it's poorly animated. It actually has an interesting style to it.

Very interesting. I've heard of this sort of thing before, but I've yet to see it as a Newgrounds submission.

Unfortunately, the visuals make it a bit hard to watch. It was grainy and the camera was constantly hunting for focus. I would find someone with a DSLR camera and ask them to record it. They can pre-focus where the light it going to be and then switch to manual focus before recording. You may be able to do the same thing with a camcorder.

zacandtheexplorerz responds:

Thankyou for being honest and you are right it is poor quality to watch, im trying to organise an actual peformance of me peforming with one of my songs....easier said than done...asap. if i had acess to gear would do it right now.

I was ready to discredit this animation for the highly cliche

icyentertainment responds:

Are you calling MY LIFE highly cliche?!?!

Unfortunately, this animation is not even complete. It's simply an animatic.

I can't give you any stars when there really isn't even a finished animation to judge.

rakorin responds:

Well I don't know man I said it was a speech animation in the description
that what you have to judge it as
its only a test for colors and mouth movements

Follow me to die instantly.

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