I normally try to watch the entire submission before reviewing, but I need to be honest, I don't think that anyone wants to sit through a 30 minute narrated slideshow. You've even included snapshots of the Youtube videos you were watching... and your illustration program has ads in it... I urge you to rethink the value of making something like this with respect to the time it took to do it. You're not really at the point where you're well-known enough that someone will actually watch you make stuff.
If I were you, I'd focus more on making content rather than documenting how you make content. Making content will help you improve and it could get you noticed. Documenting your process at this point doesn't really accomplish anything.
This animation sums up the SJW movement rather nicely.
Animation quality, writing, and voice acting were all on-point. I don't really have anything to critique.
This animation is literally seizure-inducing, and it looks like a bunch of still frames illustrated in paint and sequenced in Windows Movie Maker.
I opened up the game and immediately began using it as a tool to draw penises right in front of the guy who spent hours meticulously coding it. He was OK with it.
And that's why this is the only collaborative drawing game that's worth playing.
Nice dicks bro
I am overflowing with testosterone after playing this game.
The greatest masterpiece in modern gaming.
It's enjoyable. I believe that it could have been better without the 'wub' from 0:40 to 1:22 and 1:50 to 2:48. I understand that it's dubstep, but I could imagine this song having an entirely different feeling to it if it were another genre.
Keep up the good work. Always strive to improve.
Thanks for the review :)
It's unfortunate you didn't like the wubs. That's what I put the most effort into. Ah well.
This is great.
I'm going to use it for a movie. :D
for a credit ^^
I hope you show us the movie =)
This is cool.
I'm going to use this for a movie.
ok, be sure to credit me
I really like the style you used where the edges are kind of soft and dreamlike. I also like that you repped The Behemoth TWICE and, by the way, is that a Graphgear 1000 I see? I have both the 0.5mm and 0.3mm ones and I'm not even an artist — they're just really great pencils. Overall, really great submission, though the shadow around the feet sort of confused me.
Keep up the great work!
Thanks! Gotta rep Behemoth and Newgrounds! Always!
Those mechanical pencils have such a nice weight to them, too. I don't know about you, but I'm super heavy-handed when I sketch/write, so I can't use the thin dainty little .5mm pencil leads or they'd just break all the time. :T
Great work as always. These are excellent portraits. So much emotion is captured in each one.
I especially love the evil smile on Lunch!
I give this 5 out of 5 adorable kitties.
That is the best score using the best rating system. I'm v honoured.
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